Comments on: The Field http://thegurrier.com/2007/03/25/the-field/ Wed, 08 Dec 2010 14:08:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: Valsha http://thegurrier.com/2007/03/25/the-field/comment-page-1/#comment-13556 Valsha Mon, 16 Apr 2007 20:59:18 +0000 http://thegurrier.com/2007/03/25/the-field/#comment-13556 Wow, that's a comeback! I agree with David, very 1950s feel to it - all the words despite (or because of) the urgency. Interesting. Wow, that’s a comeback! I agree with David, very 1950s feel to it – all the words despite (or because of) the urgency. Interesting.

]]> By: TadMack http://thegurrier.com/2007/03/25/the-field/comment-page-1/#comment-11257 TadMack Mon, 26 Mar 2007 18:00:39 +0000 http://thegurrier.com/2007/03/25/the-field/#comment-11257 "But there are worse things than men in the world." This has a very Twilight Zone feel, and I can hear that guy who narrated "Dragnet" doing this. Very nice and spooky and yay for you for writing again! (Not that you haven't been writing anything, but yay for the story. You get my point.) “But there are worse things than men in the world.” This has a very Twilight Zone feel, and I can hear that guy who narrated “Dragnet” doing this. Very nice and spooky and yay for you for writing again! (Not that you haven’t been writing anything, but yay for the story. You get my point.)

]]> By: David http://thegurrier.com/2007/03/25/the-field/comment-page-1/#comment-11253 David Mon, 26 Mar 2007 15:37:05 +0000 http://thegurrier.com/2007/03/25/the-field/#comment-11253 OK, aside from the last couple of lines (you couldn't resist the pun, could you?), you're sounding very ... "Golden Age of British Literature" or something. Very different feel from your other pieces, and very classical. It's evocative of the 1950's individualistic writers, really, in that there's action, but what's more important is what's going on inside of the narrator's head. Good deal. OK, aside from the last couple of lines (you couldn’t resist the pun, could you?), you’re sounding very … “Golden Age of British Literature” or something. Very different feel from your other pieces, and very classical. It’s evocative of the 1950′s individualistic writers, really, in that there’s action, but what’s more important is what’s going on inside of the narrator’s head.

Good deal.

]]> By: Teaandcakes http://thegurrier.com/2007/03/25/the-field/comment-page-1/#comment-11215 Teaandcakes Sun, 25 Mar 2007 21:53:29 +0000 http://thegurrier.com/2007/03/25/the-field/#comment-11215 That's a great piece of writing to come back with Donal. That’s a great piece of writing to come back with Donal.

]]> By: Mari / wierdo http://thegurrier.com/2007/03/25/the-field/comment-page-1/#comment-11214 Mari / wierdo Sun, 25 Mar 2007 21:53:01 +0000 http://thegurrier.com/2007/03/25/the-field/#comment-11214 duh, filed of dreams. Should have searched before I commented! x duh, filed of dreams. Should have searched before I commented!

x

]]> By: Mari / wierdo http://thegurrier.com/2007/03/25/the-field/comment-page-1/#comment-11213 Mari / wierdo Sun, 25 Mar 2007 21:52:22 +0000 http://thegurrier.com/2007/03/25/the-field/#comment-11213 Ooo, I liked it! In my humble opinion it's somewhere between where I wanted to be and where Isobel reached (plot wise). The running from Isobel and the sci-fi from mine (ish). I hope by continuing to write flickr fiction I can reach the depth of writing I have read by everyone else! Anyhoo, I liked it...can't for the life of me think of the film quote though.... x Ooo, I liked it! In my humble opinion it’s somewhere between where I wanted to be and where Isobel reached (plot wise). The running from Isobel and the sci-fi from mine (ish).

I hope by continuing to write flickr fiction I can reach the depth of writing I have read by everyone else!

Anyhoo, I liked it…can’t for the life of me think of the film quote though….

x

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